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Paper 1 assessment learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). Grade 2 (12 marks)  WWW:  There is clear potential here: several answers start well but you dont have the knowledge yet to push the answer into the top levels EBI: revise the CSPs so you can offer detailed evidence from them (e.g. Q7 black widow)  revise narrative theory revise terminology 2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify  three  points that you could have referred to in your answer. • Focus on how connotations communicate meanings is inconsistent due to some satisfactory analysis and some description. • Occasional appropriate use of subject specific terminology. 3) For Question 3 (Galaxy - narrative features) use the mark scheme to write down the main  narrative theories  and how we can link them to the Galaxy advert CSP.  • Satisfactory analys...

'Preliminary exercise learner response'

  1) Type up your teacher's feedback  in full . If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog. WWW: Planning posted and a 40-second preliminary exercise completed – well done! The advert works – clear narrative along with product shot and slogan at the end. I love the music and it’s great you’ve used a location outside of school. You’ve got nice camera movements too such as the initial pan. Now you need to use this experience and your editing skills to deliver two excellent 40+ second adverts that meet the brief.   EBI: The biggest feedback is simple – it’s in portrait! You absolutely must film in landscape as the brief is clear that it is a TV advert and therefore to be broadcast on a normal TV channel. For the real coursework you will need a lot more shots which will give you more flexibility over the editing – particularly close-ups of both the product and the characters. Finally, you will also want some text ...

Print advert pre-production: blog tasks

  1) Plan your advertising campaign 2) New slogan for the health drink (MUST be original - cannot be existing slogan):  Water, the essence of life. 3) Main character(s) that will appear in your adverts:  my friend 4) Main image 1: What will your first advert look like?  someone drinking water and a bottle next to him 5) Main image 2: What will your second advert look like?  giving water to charity and water being cleaned from dirty areas to reduce wastage 6) Main image 3: What will your third advert look like? Remember, they all need to be different images but part of the same campaign for the same health drink. showing watering crops and then eating fresh vegetables 7) What will you use for the secondary image in each advert? This may be a product shot or similar. Remember, this needs to be three  different  images just like the main images.  said with the first 8) Who will be in your adverts? my friends 9) Write the 70 words that will appear on ...

Prelim excercise

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